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Mystery Most Dangerous by ~black-cookie:iconblack-cookie:





It's a mystery most dangerous I face,
Do I join in with what bonds our people?
If I am to jump I will land on ectasy or hell,
Now I wait in purgatory for persuasion or a push.

The placing of my pen my aid my search,
But if I am mistaken,
My light will be gone,
I will sit and turn pale,
Eyes lost and numbness gained,
A mystery most dangerous.
©2007-2009 ~black-cookie
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Author's Comments

Something written about intepretation of your own feelings.

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:iconmiss-meg:
i just woke up so i don't have the mind to say anything particuarly clever but i do like this poem and i remember where that picture came from, hehe x

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:iconsilver-raeff:
At risk of sounding like a dumb idiot - i haven't a clue what any of this means but it sounds scary. I should be a professional critic shouldn't i?!?!

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Yoooouuu Beastttt
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Oh i think i see... its kinda sad : ( in a tearful way. Well it would have been, but its not : )

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Yoooouuu Beastttt
:iconharlequin-heart:
this is really, reall good.
its something i can rely relate to at the moment, you've managed to put into words how i've felt for a very long time. good one x

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